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Started: 9:45 PM


Stepping forward almost
walking further back,
wishing by the meadow
of Father's nearest track,

I lept among the flowers,
and danced with lily minds,
the way my mother taught me,
the brightest, sweetest kinds.

Sun upon my forehead
and grass beneath my toes,
I walked through lands of daydreams
and watched as water flowed.

Two kinds of people watched me,
two meanings made my day
a kind of silent testing
in every sort of way.

I moved along the corner,
and danced along the fence
where fireflies and honeybees
made magic quite immense.

And all along the noontime
and all throughout the night,
I learned the birth of nature
and breathed the ray of light.

Two kinds of people watched me,
two souls unknown to me,
the ones I thought I knew
and ones I couldn't see.


Finished: 9:49 PM
Only very minor edits made after writing this in the time mentioned, and mostly for spelling and grammar.

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angelenroute Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
No responses. Grr.
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angelenroute Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Ahhhhhh!!!! It's alive! Thought I'd lost it--I had!! And yet, here it is!!!!
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